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Quaranteam 2:7

🕑 Added 2023-04-11 01:09:57 +0000 UTC

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J.D.

After rereading all chapters and comments, I think Todd should be one of your proofreaders. He seems to have a hell of an eye for detail and a great memory along with it.

Edward Becerra

If Andy does so, an elderly gentleman by the name of Edward Baccarat might be by to purchase an autographed copy. He *does* have one of the low numbered store accounts at the Tattered Cover. In the low 1700's, in fact. For the past 30 some years. ;)

Wait is that a hint for a future chapter?

Corrupting Power

Niko didn’t want to worry anyone unnecessarily. She was fairly certain he was still in the house and not worried enough to wake Piper.

Andy Edge

Niko having lost track of Andy. Ok, I kinda get this a little I guess, but doesn't Niko understand Pipers ability to track Andy by scent? A quick check with her should let her know he is in the house in just a few moments, right? hmmmm, and keeping that little tidbit from Melody for a while may be really smart too....

TM

Going on a trip with a sketchy woman who is new to the team and secretly speaks Russian. Hmmm...

Corrupting Power

Miiiiiiiiiight make an exemption for the Tattered Cover, just because they're mostly independent and such a legacy place. ;)

Corrupting Power

Good catch. Continuity's your friend until it's your enemy. Fixed everywhere except the PDF, and will be fixed in future distributions also.

Todd Garrison

As I said in the earlier comment excellent chapter. I just reread it again and one more note Andy’s nephew is Conner not Colin(that’s Ash’s youngest brother).

Ronan

Powell's in Portland?

Old Dragon

I will admit I am seriously curious as to what book store you are choosing for Seattle.

J.D.

I can totally understand and respect that but then it makes me wonder why a person who was in charge and/or so highly ranked would ask Andy if he wanted to tell Niko. While things like this aren’t a big deal in the realm of the story, whenever something pops up that seems unusual I tend to want answers which I am sure is part of both my OCD and PTSD working overtime. Thanks for your input since it helped clear up that question.

Edward Becerra

Denver, but *NOT* the Tattered Cover Bookstore? An outrage, sir, A veritable outrage! ;) 😆

Admiral Ale

J.D. promotions of military personnel, is just that, a military event. In civilian life, your boss would not call your spouse to tell you. The promoted person would be advised as to where and when.

JC

bookmark

Corrupting Power

Now fixed everywhere except the PDF.

Corrupting Power

Yep, missed it. Text has been edited (ten people, not nine; Emily in second car). I swear I thought I had her in the there, but sometimes these things slipped by.

Bammerman

Have to agree, that stood out to me as well

Rick Shaw

Nice shift

J.D.

I have to agree with Todd that this was excellent and I thought Emily was missing in the cars even though she was part of the RFC. I found it a nice change of pace the way that Andy took control by sneaking out of bed to get everything in motion before anyone could attempt to shut it down. The only part I found strange was how adamant Andy was about giving Niko the good news. I can’t wait for him to meet up with all the families and see if anything rubs anyone the wrong way.

Shaqjor477

That is a good point!!

Rurik

I liked this one a lot, and am looking forward to seeing how it all plays out!

Todd Garrison

Excellent chapter, but why didn’t Emily go if all the fiancé’s we’re going.


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