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The Fertile Grove: The Beginning (Ch. 1)

🕑 Added 2023-04-22 21:04:36 +0000 UTC

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Ian B

Skimmed this again after reading it originally on LE. Great story. Love the deep layers of thought that went into it

KernFlakes

I just finished reading the 4th chapter and that thought just came to my mind as well and came here looking to see if anyone else had asked that.

Michael R

So...how do they pee? Are pendants hanging from trees randomly shooting streams of urine? April goldenshowers? Does his bag become saturated with piss?

Corrupting Power

More is coming!

Invictus

One of the most entertaining and creative stories you've written! Absolutely loved it! More in this series pls!

Terrik392

I'm conflicted. I loved the story and can't wait to read more but at the same time you have so many other great ones already. Either way, I guess I just have to wait and enjoy whatever is next.

Corrupting Power

Not the Threadbinder world. Very different set of magical systems in operation.

pohmii Holloman

This is a great start. Would be cool if you could find an illustrator to turn it into a comic strip

J.D.

You did it again. This was filled with everything you could want from a story although in all the stories you create a have no bloody idea how you keep all the names straight for the right person in the correct story unless you have the world’s largest database of characters but even that wouldn’t be so easy. Thanks again for sharing another fun read.

SovietDegendays

Damn I enjoyed this one alot!

Corrupting Power

There will be. Originally, it had been intended to sort of be a one-and-done, but the person who commissioned it wanted to see a lot more of the character and the universe he inhabits, and had some thoughts on how I could continue the story, so there is more coming.

Roadspill

Definitely needs some additional chapters. Absolutely brilliant story.

Ronan

Also, either "military" or "army", not both. If you want a two-word equivalent, try "military service" or "armed forces"

Ronan

Magnificent story. It's labeled as Chapter 1, but seems like a completed tale. Will there be additional chapters?

Old Dragon

Brilliant!

Otterly Ruddertail

Go in with the plan… four years in advance. Seriously, dude’s gonna be hired to test some defenses, the target will think nothing’s wrong, and suddenly wake up to eight different security breaches and his wife mysteriously pregnant with a half-dwarf.

Kaywye

Awesome, Batman level of planning boyo. There's a guy who will go far in life.

James Waske

Excellent, look forward to seeing more... If the indication of chapter 1 is accurate. Is this the threadbinder world

James Johnston

Excellent

Jeffrey Sutyla

Fucking legend. He wasn't a man with a plan - he was the man with ALL the plans. Absolutely loved this!


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