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Quaranteam: Book 2, Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2023-05-21 06:46:38 +0000 UTC

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Edward Becerra

Speaking as a retired soldier, JC, you don't want to start a fight if you're not in a prepared position. Andy _isn't_, not for this particular fight, not yet. He will be, eventually, but things take time. He didn't know about the MPA, he needs time to get his words in order. But when he does? Mark Twain used to say that it was stupid to pick fights with people who bought ink by the barrel, and he had damned good reason to say so. When Andy is ready, he'll be _ready_. And he'll be dangerous.

patient1

Looking forward to glimpses into everyday life at the next couple of stops. Most people aren't rich like Andy, or a team of doctors like Phil's household. Jobs and housing. Are the seniors and 10 & 11 year olds working, at least part time in a patriotic effort to keep the economy going? I could see grannies driving delivery trucks with kids running the packages to the porches. Or maybe the kids are taking over the phones and help desks remotely. What is Florida like without tourists ? Gainsville without students? Is Ohio making stuff again because China is incapacitated?

JC

Yeah I was surprised at this too and upset that Andy didn't bring it up on national news!!

Edward Becerra

I'm certain his ladies felt that a few things were pretty dang long that day. :)

Edward Becerra

And here's one for you. A lot of the extreme preppers would probably overlap with the loony "da gubment is tryn'ta microchip mah penis" crowd. Which means that a number of preppers would die. But not their stockpiles - literally meant to last for years, in some cases. If you knew your (now late) uncle Arthur had a supply dump hidden under his cabin in the woods, meant to feed his family (also croaked of DuoHalo) for twenty years, do you share it? Or keep it secret to use yourself? Or just let it go to waste?

Corrupting Power

Give the man a break. It was a long, long day. ;)

Corrupting Power

Huh. I had to look up "victory gardens" but it raises some interesting ideas. I didn't want to overload any one chapter with too many details about how things have changed, but that's part of the reason they're doing the tour -- to see bit by bit all the things that have changed that you wouldn't necessarily think about...

Metadi

I’m enjoying how character driven the story is. You might work on having some more color of the changes around them than empty streets and Male Protection Act. I thought the bit about the sandwich place was great. I think of all the little things that changed during COVID that were starting but really took off. Im thinking of on line ordering for restaurants. Or how you can order groceries and you just pick up the totes. I wonder in a health emergency like you describe would the norm be that you place an order and contactless pick up? Where would the cracks appear? Would they still be air freighting grapes from Chile in February? I could see a real push for victory gardens like WWII and up cycling as the supply chains choke without labor to move things through. It’ll be interesting as team Rook comes out of their bubble how different the world is.

Edward Becerra

I love Piper's line. "You. Sit. Cock out." Aggressive women who know what they want. Gotta love them. Literally, in Andy's case. (tho, from those last few lines, Andy needs to work on his stamina. ;) )

Ronan

Good chapter.

Todd Garrison

Very good chapter, I’m impressed as how well you have ingratiated Lexis roll as the bodyguard.

Admiral Ale

Nice, sweet, but short. Did notice that there was no discussion about MPA.

JC

bookmark

Rurik

Awesome! Glad next one came out before I went to sleep!


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