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A Pack Of His Own - Ch. 6 (all patrons)

🕑 Added 2023-08-17 07:31:06 +0000 UTC

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Ian B

Uncle P. Now this got spicy at the Boulder BK

JC

hard disagree

Mehntal1st

I understand this is a commissioned work so there are likely some constraints you are working within, but I am always disappointed when sex scenes basically just have the dude mount the woman, pound away, they both cum and its exclaimed as the "best she's ever had". I much prefer some foreplay of some kind, maybe detail out a few orgasms before a magic dick does all the work. It just feels disingenuous for the reader to believe something was mind blowing just because its said to be when it was basically just a few sentences about sticking it in, thrusting and hitting an orgasm. I'm obviously not the commissioner and this is otherwise a great chapter, having Dina eat out the cream pie from earlier was very hot, but I just feel Wills involvement could have been fleshed out more.

Todd Garrison

Very good chapter, really enjoyed tha.


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