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Neon Stonehenge - Ch. 9 (Alpha readers)

🕑 Added 2024-06-17 09:20:28 +0000 UTC

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Gary Coleman

It really IS hard to stay writing in 1st person constantly. I can't do it, and I've seen other writers struggle with it too. I admire Corrupting Power's ability to stay within those confines so we'll over the years.

JC

You went into third person for a couple sentences: "He was surprised she wasn’t wearing a wetsuit, but decided the board was more of a prop for the shot. He turned past the headshot"


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