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Brewster's Brood - Pt. 38

🕑 Added 2024-07-22 22:30:08 +0000 UTC

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Tristin Sedlacek

I think you misread subtext, they didn't say he wouldn't have the capability to track the woman down, or retaliate against the group running the gig(drove me crazy every time gig was misspelled - what a gag!) What they said was that he couldn't, meaning it was written into the will that if he did his inheritance would be rescinded or similar.

Andrei

This is good stuff. I just wish there were a hundred more chapters to read already!!! Ok. I gotta bring this up though. It just cracks me up whenever these people say “oh he can’t retaliate so I’m not worried about consequences to us” or some such. Or that the women will be too scattered about and he won’t be able to do anything about it. The guy is going to have a hundred and fifty Billion dollars and time. He can do literally anything he wants. Including buying an island chain, building a complex on it and paying spec ops teams to transport all the women and all the children to this complex. Come on. He won’t be able to find them? lol. He can’t retaliate against the people running this? Please. He can do anything he wants to them once he has the money. That’s the part that just has me going lol. Like, yeah, if you’re pregnant and want to leave that’s nice but let’s not kid ourselves, this guy has the rest of his life and unlimited funds to do whatever he wants with

David Luper

This is such a great story concept, and you are writing it in a compelling and interesting way (like all your work!). It would be great to get more internal dialogue from Max on how crazy his life has become and become more and more suspicious of what is happening. I know that he has decided to stop thinking about it intentionally, but people can't help themselves and will bounce back and forth despite those kind of self decisions. It would add a level of realism to it and make Max even more an interesting character to read about - you know, he figures out what is happening to him and confronts Churchill (maybe through his watchers). Maybe bringing his clandestine friend back with an update would catalyze that. Anyway, I love this story, and it is #2 for me after QT2! Thank you!!

Kaywye

Yes, more of this please. Though every chapter, I'm a bit more concerned that this will come off the rails in a truly spectacular way. I don't see how this is tenable, but I'm here for it regardless.

Old Dragon

Great chapter, very well done.

Si

Another great chapter bit short for my tastes but great … hopefully the next chapter of this isn’t too far away

SovietDegendays

Man I want more of this one in particular


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