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Smokeland Slumdance - Ch. 1

🕑 Added 2024-08-10 02:27:48 +0000 UTC

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Psychopuppy

Interesting, but still waiting for some other drops to other stories.

LightningCasino

Nice different edge of a story

Todd Garrison

Disappointed, Sorry not my cup of tea.

SovietDegendays

P good start

Admiral Ale

As I always say, a new story line, equals to another plate in the balancing act.. Stay safe.

Dennis McNulty

Good start to an interesting story. Sort of in the same vein as William Gipson's "Nueromancer", "Count Zero" or "Burning Chrome"...

Gregg Hagerty

"so at least she had the common sense to keep the money makers from having someone run away them." Something here doesn't ring right but I can't get it from the rest of the context.

Gregg Hagerty

"Koh-D and I didn’t see eye-to-eye on several things, but each time she’d tell me that when I had my own shop, I could things my way, and I could learn why she’d done them the way she had." Maybe a "do" between "could" and "things"?

Gregg Hagerty

"Most fixers dream of getting retire." I think there is a "to" missing before "retire." But I can see it as local color as well.


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