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Quaranteam: Unbroken Mold - Ch. 2 (Alphas)

🕑 Added 2024-03-12 23:09:06 +0000 UTC

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Corrupting Power

QTB2 has had 2 chapters every month like clockwork with the exception of the month of Ch20, which was basically the length of 3 chapters. It's not that hard to figure out.

Admiral Ale

This story line is good, but, as always, I see in every new spinoff, an additional delay in writing more chapters of QT2., etc. Between all the story lines, are we headed to 1 chapter per quarter, or will we even one per every 6 months. With all the QT writers you have out there, how can there be 2, 3 and possibly 4+ days straight without a single story QT posted? Oh well, in one of my past jobs, I looked at things that followed certain events. Stay safe.

Velyndin1989

Per chapter one he is half Asian half white hence the last name. Dad is a redhead and mom is Asian.

Christopher.g

“Weird science…” hmmmm. Are red heads going to take over the world..?

Todd Garrison

I think both chapters are good, but have fundamental flaws in chapter 1. The description of Tom as Asian/American with black hair(chapter 1) a redhead in chapter 2 and his Dad also a redhead.

Tnrkitect

Great continuation! One bit of grammar that doesn't flow right in pp 48: "There was another project, originally intended to be a working towards an injury recovery serum that they sort of stumbled into a working solution for dealing with the problem we were currently facing." I think it will flow better broken into two sentences, with some minor edits: In the first part of the sentence, " intended to be a working towards" should omit the "a" and a period after "serum". Omit "that" starting the next sentence with "They".


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