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Quaranteam: Phil's Tale - Ch. 24

🕑 Added 2025-04-09 01:17:18 +0000 UTC

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Linda often plays 'ignorant' in conversations when she thinks Phil might be talking 'off the record,' to avoid getting caught up in sharing secrets, since early on, Andy's not really supposed to be privy to such things. Linda's absence prior to this chapter takes place the day after Maya's brought over, and is when she's helping get Eve onto the base.

Gary Coleman

Hmmm... As you may know, Devin, I've been reading this one concurrently with (rereading) the main Book 1 story, and I'm pretty sure there's a major plot point that's been overlooked. In the main story, when Phil brought over Maya, wasn't Linda also with him? When Phil was discussing the Eve dilemma, Linda was involved in that conversation. At the start of this chapter, though, I got the sense she HADN'T been with him, and was clueless about that conversation. Did I miss something?

WSV

One small typo, when they are meeting with General Bonner and Phil says he's not breaking down any Senators doors... I think that Senators should be the possessive version there - Senators' doors. Another excellent tale adding backstory and flavor for us. Thank you!


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