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Chapter 31 : Interrogation

🕑 Added 2025-07-07 12:55:40 +0000 UTC

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ZephyrZepar

Changes made for a massive improvement!

Lord_Meph1sto

Yes, I feel like I can do this chapter better. The idea was for the dialogue to seem normal at first, so Batman wouldn’t realize he was Architect right away—but later, something about it would trigger a sudden realization

Fire_Fox2590

I feel like Architect was too obvious in his initial delivery as zsasz. He talked about justice, scales, balance. Was not subtle about it at all. It would have worked better if the interrogation was longer, and maybe if you put one word every 5 sentences or something, mixed in with material that sounds more like Zsasz.


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