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🕑 Added 2021-07-17 05:34:26 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

Indeed, I'm not a great fight scene writer by a long shot. I'll admit it is the hardest part for me to write, compared to the rest. To me, a real fight is in seconds. Fighting over the rivers and mountains for a thousand moves is just...stupid to me.

ShadeByTheSea

I'm not a huge fan of fight scenes in general, I've read thousands of them so I prefer them on the shorter side now. Sometimes a really good fight scene makes it through my disinterest. More reading the story for plot and level/power progression(don't come for the fights, come for the gains!). So vol 7 has been a great arc for me, if a little too much fighting for my taste. I really like how you handled the fights though. What I guess I'm trying to say is I'm not a good person to judge if a fight scene is good or not.

Mr. Bigglesworth

The trait of Shield of the Library protects her from Dimensional effects, not stamina-based skills performed in the same dimension. While the Shield keeps things out, it also shows the exact line you can strike from. He stepped out of the Dimension he was in, and just like her own teleport, used a Skill, Backstab, to hit her. Since his Skill is based on Stamina, it doesn't get affected by the anti-magic field.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Because she's realized that being protected does nothing to stop them from waiting till the protection period is over while keeping her under observation and then nabbing her. Or even nabbing her as long as no harm occurs, which a higher Tier would have a high chance of doing. The fact that she can't communicate with Sara means they have a way to block mental messaging, and if you can block it, you can listen in as well is a good assumption to make. The only reason to lengthen her fight is to allow higher Tier combatants on the Arena payroll the time to arrive in town if they aren't there already. She's planning to escape alone because she trusts that Sara has made plans of her own, and doesn't want to lead the trackers to her people.

Banroth

Doesn't she have a week to plan how to escape? She should be protected after the arena finishes at least for a while. Why then such hasty planning?


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