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🕑 Added 2021-07-24 06:49:57 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

Your concerns are valuable input. Thank you! So, I've been trying to show that Sara is good at business. She knows the ins and outs of making money, but magical contracts aren't really her forte. Looking for loopholes isn't really what she specializes in; maximizing money or investing is. Eve missed the same traps in the contract, and to be honest, both of them were blinded by greed. The dragon isn't random. He's a sneaky way to show that Space magic is R.A.R.E., especially a way to counter the ease and speed. I know that hasn't really been shown, as Eve got it at Tier Three and has abused it this whole time. However, the dragon is my desperate authorial attempt to show Eve is far out of whack with normal Affinity gains. I cannot promise there won't be another Arena scene ever again. I mean, the story will be going as long as I live(hopefully), and the future is never set in stone. However, I do promise that any future Arena content in the faaaaaaaaaaaar future will more than likely involve Eve betting on the helpless contestants, rather than being the one many bet on in the bloody sands!

ShadeByTheSea

I still like the story, but I don't really like the direction it's been going. With random high tiers, a dragon(that has no reason to associate with something as lowly as a 3rd tier and lower arena), and Sarah somehow missing obvious traps in the contracts. It seems like a contrived way to separate her from everyone else and send her to a new random place. Idk I'll stick around for a while longer, but I hope there's never another arena in the story again, at least not one she gets involved in.

Alexandra

I believe she is referencing her brother. She probably rightly assumed/hoped at his level of power the Tier Six would have heard of him if his titles have spread through different worlds and the System itself is very wary of him

Nimps

What was the Darkness again?


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