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🕑 Added 2021-07-30 04:00:45 +0000 UTC

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Arkeus

We'll see how it goes, but amusing that each time she follows the kid's advice she screws herself over and then forget that she did it by following it. Let's hope she realises soon her current position comes from listening to Matt.

Mr. Bigglesworth

I hope so too!

Tyler Hooker

Im kinda....iffy...on her personality change, ive found most authors cant do that kind of personality correctly and it more often than not ruins the entire book, turning the mc into an unfeeling object, which i hope you dont make the mistake of doing

Kemizle

What does the Talisman of Dust look like?

Adam Daw

Wow, what a left field turn o_O . Not sure how I feel about it. So, she got spooked and took the nuclear option?

Mr. Bigglesworth

Nope, the Dungeon(Felix), the Hut, Kudzu, and Nota are all separate entities not part of her Status. Creating the Talisman of Dust was done by the System and only affected her Skills, Spells, and Traits that were affected by Primordial Dust. Living items bound to her or in her service are considered separate entities, and thus unaffected. Also...Nota is female...

Banroth

Is her hut/house part of her new zone or the talisman? If not, shouldn't it be listed under items? Same question for Note, I would expect him to be part of the Zone?

tibbish

Glad she is learning from her mistakes! Knew there had to be a big cost involved once she started to deviate from her bros advice

Noah

lots of week day chapters thanks

Cryptic_Reality

Yesssss! Loving this development! I love the whole nanotech-like powers! Go forth Eve! Go forth and devour everything in your way! *evil cackling*

Cperkenling

NANOMACHINES SON! OP cheat powers are one thing but the mental transformation is the real important part here. She stubbornly kept up a peacetime mindset in the environment of infinite wartime and it cost her an arm and a leg (kek). Curious how her brother will react. He of all people probably will understand.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Soulbound, and her soul can't be damaged, so it cannot be removed.

Great chapter, just a little niggle for me personally. Why give up so much to craft the talisman when it is an item that could be taken from her in the future. Is it bound to her in any way? Don't get me wrong very cool idea and implementation and it makes sense, just she's heading into the higher teirs and their be things bigger than dragons.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Remind me at 9.0a if I forget, please?

Alexandra

I 100% request a reaction from a character in a future side POV to the runes on her Talisman btw. The skills descriptions lead me to believe they are some mind bending level scary/cool/powerful looking ones

Mr. Bigglesworth

They will, I will clear it up next chapter to make it smoother, or I might re-write a part of this one.

Alexandra

Only point id like to raise is could you perhaps specify which skills got aggregated into which? I assume the mental skills would go to Library of Dust. Edit: NVM going back to read it I see Talisman took them I think? Its name just threw me off from thinking it has the mental traits. Future chapters will show how those skills work im sure

Mr. Bigglesworth

Indeed, I plotted it for a whole book!

Alexandra

That is a rather elegant solution to future skill bloat in my opinion. Just subsume it all into greater powers I like it!

Mr. Bigglesworth

She's in the Prison Plane. It's where the Light Elves and Demons got stuck after almost destroying Tal Mor, the planet she just left. The Plane is 'protected' by the Primordial Dust, which existed before the System arrived at this dimension. It sits in the Void outside the Prison Plane feeding on things that try to invade and those that try to exit, as well as taking small nibbles of the expanding Plane. The only way past it is a Portal, or it lets you enter.

An_Amazing_Username

So far I'm rather liking the changes Eve has made, and it'll be interesting to see how Eve changes now that she's whole.

An_Amazing_Username

I am amazed. This is great. Question though, where is she? I’m a tad confused as to the chain of events recently.

Mr. Bigglesworth

+_+ Looking into the Abyss is terrible enough. Imagine having it take a bite or two. Such things, change a person. For the better, probably.


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