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12.6

🕑 Added 2021-12-19 07:52:58 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

Fixt, these chapters are likely when I didn't have Grammarly being used for a bit.

Kemizle

Lily nodded solemnly before saying, “I’m I made you mad.” [I] made you mad

Relint

two slightly less well-dressed woman* moved to accompany each of the children. [*women]

Mr. Bigglesworth

No, but I can see the correlation being drawn and am honored!

DvaDI

Is it just me or is Eve slowly turning into Featherine Augustus Aurora and Nota into The City Of Books? Which is pretty damn cool if that's what gave you inspiration for her powerset. Given the power of her brother she'd probably need that level of power to have her big sister rights back.

Kemizle

Couldn’t Eve have the candle hang from her neck like a pendant instead of having it floating?

Mr. Bigglesworth

Flexible moral boundaries. They exist, but they stretch for circumstances...yes...that's it... *scribbles a note to self*

Wargen

Great chapter! I love when Eve's (almost nonexistent in most regards) moral boundaries are crossed

Mr. Bigglesworth

I spent extra time trying to format a fancy look for the item. Sowwy for the delay :(


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