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Wastes and Wilds Kyo 1.2

🕑 Added 2022-02-13 06:13:59 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

I don't think I'll go quite that far, but perhaps along those lines.

Mr. Bigglesworth

I mean, reading the 'future' story is optional. Whenever I finally figure out how to do a ToC correctly it shouldn't be an issue at all then.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Kudzu existed before they even met Felix, and his reply is based on that, not on Felix's actual age pre-meeting Eve.

Kemizle

I was just thinking about one of those creation myths where a god is sleeping and the universe is his dream and when he wakes up the universe is destroyed. You could play with that idea so that when Eve finally wakes up it turns out she was inadvertently productive

Kemizle

Since when is kudzu older that Felix? I assumed Felix was the oldest one there

Gregory Hunsicker

I think it would really depend on HOW slow of a build up. Spend to long away from Eve and you might start losing some readers. I've seen it over and over again where side stories are released with different main characters and people start getting annoyed. About the only way I see it working though is the way your doing it now. Where your telling two stories at the same time in the same universe but just different story arcs/time periods in the story. I find myself very curious on how she's even going to remotely try and wake Eve up. So the side story has at least gotten me pretty interested. I'm just slightly worried I might get annoyed at the lack of Eve XD lol. Still early days though for the character, so we'll have to see. So far I'm enjoying her though.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Indeed, trying hard not to OP her in the first 20 chapters and keep her a street smart girl with a slow rise burn.

Kemizle

I love how she just went back to sleep


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