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Scorching Ascension - 1.64: Two and a half (Pt. 2) (Unedited)

🕑 Added 2025-01-19 04:13:58 +0000 UTC

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calcroissant

Fixed the typo! Glad you're the setting interesting. I hope I'll be able to do it justice by tthe time the flashback is over

guillaume nguyen

"Ethan followed Marvin, carefully maneuvering his duffel-bag so it would knock down any of the decorative elements in his way." Wouldn't. "Kid trains train since middle-school and they don’t get into those fancy sport programs." Remove one train. That's exactly the kind of toxic environment and vicious characters that I would be more wary of than a few fist fights. The latter only result in some bruises, at worst some broken bones. The former can and will ruin minds and lives for decades if left alone. Also, this Paul guy is useless at his job, this Marvin was clearly used as a servant controlled by fear. Luther is a good man, he cares more than anyone at school or at the child placement program.


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