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Scorching Ascension - 1.44: Fire and scales (Unedited)

🕑 Added 2024-11-22 17:25:01 +0000 UTC

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guillaume nguyen

It takes a special kind of courage for a man to jump unto a flaming, razor claw wielding, enraged monster while buck naked. Even though a normal underwear wouldn't be able to protect anything from a glancing blow, let alone a more targeted attack, at least it would grant some psychological relief. Respect. Also, I hope that Ethan second element will be lightning ^^ It's always less cliche than blood or darkness ^^

calcroissant

Thanks a bunch! I really appreciate it and it's now fixed! :) That's really the biggest advantage of doing serialized stuff like this. You catch these mistakes early before they snowball out of control. I'm already reworking the early chapters after the feedback I got. It's a work in progress but hopefully when the book's all done, it'll be an enjoyable experience for most (can't always please everyone :p )

Kanashii

I always forget about positive feedback so I'll try balancing the previous comment a bit :P I enjoy the story so far. And the recent development of everyone's mental state made it much more real and relatable. I'd say you're doing great where it matters and the things I point out are only the minor stuff ;)

calcroissant

Actually Kanashii, that's a legitimate mistake. Amma do some emergency fixing right now. He shouldn't have access to fireball in this form. Thanks for pointing it out

Kanashii

I really don't like nitpicking but Ethan lobbed Smal Fireball while having Scales. In chapter 39 equipping Scales turned off Fireball so I guess he would need to swap Mana Heart for Fireball somewhere in the middle of the battle or something. I don't know if or how you would like to explain that but we didn't see much Mana Heart in action during the combat (other than Ethan flexing after killing Lizardling) so it would be the easiest way to fix it


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