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Undersea Reincarnation - 2.46: The instructor (Unedited)

🕑 Added 2024-12-18 19:25:28 +0000 UTC

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calcroissant

Good point, i’ll try to flesh out a few things when i’m editing book 2. 👌

Elinar Godly

A minor suggestion, I beleive its more accurate gramatically. "....considering his first meeting with (the) two warriors, Zamir and Semea,..." I would have liked to see Henry wave back to the friendly people in the beginning of the chapter. Not a big thing but it sets him as a friendly awakened monster. And the nuance of him responding to their friendliness and not seems important to me. If a stranger waved or said hi I would respond just out of politeness, and he did talk about that with Maurice. But maybe I am digging in too much. I am just enjoying it all a lot. You do add a nod later, maybe that is enough.

Denva

Thank you

calcroissant

All good. It's a new setting in the post creation form. Can't modify old stuff but I'll make sure to select it in the future. It's off by default :/

Denva

Yes it's in the settings. The author of the Syl novel was able to fix it.

calcroissant

I'll look into it but I haven't changed anything on my end. This might be a patreon thing if has recently changed

Denva

Can you change the setting of jow chapters are sent to your readers by email. Make it so the entire chapter is displayed and we don't have to go to Patreon please.

calcroissant

In spirit! You can't get away with dodgy behaviour on technicalities

Touch

Author, does the oath enforce in spirit or the letter? If it’s in spirit then yeah, it’s good deal for both, her for info/research potential/good will from future powerhouse. And him the info/training. But if it’s to the letter…

calcroissant

There might be some interest for her to push him to realize his potential, but she did repeat Zerathstra’s oath to not try any shady business. As for Henry, he wouldn’t refuse a freely given course, but it doesn’t mean he’d put himself at risk just for that. Things will get clearer as we go :)

Touch

The first question should be, what would be the price? Establishing herself as an authority figure all while giving MC his much needed benefits certainly put him a LOT in her debt… it’s might be good and all but the SHEER possibility of him being used is crazyyy even if it doesn’t “harm” him

DraponsArmy

Poor kraken. She's breaking his heart. Lol


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