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Scorching Ascension - 1.59: Burn (Unedited)

🕑 Added 2025-01-03 17:59:53 +0000 UTC

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calcroissant

Thanks a bunch and thanks for reading! You’re right those problematic. Will fix those up in a few hours.

Elinar Godly

Hey Cal, just joined to check your work. I am enjoying Scorching Ascension quite a bit and will check Undersear Resurection next. I noticed two spots that can use a bit of a touch up, capital letters are my suggestions: "Ethan pumped his arms while Ember hung on for dear life atop of his horns. He’d tried to put her on his shoulders, but she (IT) was more uncomfortable to(FOR) both of them over there. He had to move his arm and shoulders, to dodge, and cast his spells, so up on the horns she went." "Ethan took a deep breath, and ignited his claws as a rumbly breath escaped from the four-feet high monsters. It was massive. At least ten feet long, from snout to tail. Green glistening moss covered its joinTS and back, and lurid green smoke wafted out of its mouth." Keep up the good work!

calcroissant

Fixed! I was thinking of calcined, but charred is better. TY!

guillaume nguyen

"It will move out of his way, by its own volition, or it will be burnt, and he will step over its calcified bones as he keeps walking." Eeeer, by design, bones are already calcified, that's what makes them bones in the first place XDXDXD I think you meant to say charred ^^

Logan

Tftc


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