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Phantom 16

🕑 Added 2022-07-23 06:13:11 +0000 UTC

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Russell Taylor

I agree with Gerald, i also thought that him telling them they were basicly fighting a god with no hope of winning was hilarious

Gerald

I'd say I'd flowed nicely in most places. Probably fairly accurate about how they'd respond. The only confusing part for me is apparently the queen ordering him beheaded when she knew he was coming or was it just the standing order for invaders

PP092

So was it natural? The combat and the dialogue both? Cause it was as easy as it was tough this time

Gerald

Hmmmm the dialog between Diana and her mother was nice. And the fight at the end was interesting but could have be avoided had everyone been informed harry was coming especially since it seemed he already had permission from the queen to come

PP092

Decided to stop at the best forst place I found. On that note, what did you like about this one?

Gerald

Is a cliffhanger really necessary every chapter lol


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