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Dark Bride (v 2)
🕑 Added 2025-11-04 01:49:27 +0000 UTCSarah and Jake are a kind and loving couple, soon to be married. But a trip to a Halloween party might change their lives.... forever.
A F2F CORRUPTION STORY!
NOTE:
I felt I needed MORE from Dark Bride, posted originally here. It needed to be sexier, with better progression. So I did a bunch of rewrites and additions. I think it's better, for sure.
(And it still needs to be proofread again, if anyone wants to take a crack at it. Looking for an ongoing proofreader, too. Not paid, but it'll have perks. DM if yer interested.)
Comments
animalmusic
Have you ever thought of animating this story?
LeaderBlue
If I may make a suggestion, I recommend you start doing updates weekly. Even if there's not much to say, it'll be better than nothing for extended periods of time. I'm sure you've noticed the aggressive comments people have left due to that.
Jarasan
You mean someone to take a look before you release it ?
