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Short Story #1 - Privileged
🕑 Added 2021-05-18 15:40:31 +0000 UTC- There is a Clean and Dirty (Toilet Descriptive) version of this story. The dirty version has an extra page, due to the clean version not containing that content.
- It is best to view these in MS Word format and not in PDF.
This short story is about an average day in Tsumi's life, starting with her catching some TRF dissents in New Phoenix, to going to Chisana's for her lunch.
It mostly contains Vore, but also has: Digestion, Crush, Willing (blue plates), Unwilling (red plates), Ass Insertion, and Toilet Stuff (dirty version only). I also edited about 50% of the original story (was 8000 words, Dirty is 10500, Clean is 9800) to tie in with the world.
This short story was an expensive commission from Joyce, with images also commissioned from Garrisen. I couldn't get the PDF's to keep high quality images (Cover, 2nd Page, Various) so I've provided both MS Word and PDF's.
You can download the stories attached to this post below, or via this link here.
Comments
Scott Miller
I haven't played the game yet. I will do that next. ^_^
Daichi
Sadly I had time and funding issues when it was made, the story alone cost me 450 I think it was before editing so nevermind the pictures :P Haven't you visited the city in the game? :O
Scott Miller
Overall, I liked the story and the artwork was good. The one thing I had a hard time visualizing though, was how Tsumi could move through the micro city of New Phoenix. Based on the description of her size in comparison to the inhabitants, it seems that the streets would need to be so wide as to make moving around the city for its inhabitants quite the journey. I’d be curious if the city was planned to allow Shrinkex employees easier access through the city than the people living within. :P My favorite part was the action in the first part of the story with the starting chase scene and poor Aria being caught and joining the remains of Tsumi’s breakfast at the end. I think it would be awesome to have that segment completely drawn in a future comic if possible (I would love to see a picture included of Aria swimming around in Tsumi’s stomach ^^).
Daichi
For the reasons I had already listed on why I uploaded both Word and PDF.
Nicholas Donald Piedmonte
Daichi
And let me know what you think! Short stories are a new thing to me, and I did end up editing about 50% of the original >_>
