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Selling drugs in the Dungeon should be a profitable business, no? Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2023-08-24 01:57:51 +0000 UTC

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SamuraiCheem

I have plans - and some hopes - that in the future i can write my own unique Cultivation Novel, with none of the shenanigans that have unfortunately become copy and paste in all of them.

Benjamin Shklyar

Honestly this type of story is what I love. It's honestly why I don't care for most cultivation protagonist, they are mainly uncaring about others apart from their own growth or strength. I love reading about a kind protagonist. I like sexy characters, I can enjoy op protagonists, but honestly reading about characters like these is truly satisfying to me. It honestly makes me curious of you writing a story that takes place in a true cultivation world.

Kureiji Ryuu

Man this chapter was perfect, totally worth the wait for the rewrite.

Hellfox

I love the rewrite a bit more tooo

Nicolette

Riley getting struck by lightning and Hera consequently going out to tan Zeus' hide for it will never not be funny to me. So not only does this concotion heal the girls from the poisoning, it transforms them into heavenly jade beauties? Did I get that correctly? If so, very nice, I'd like side effects like that in my own medicine! Thanks for the chapter Musa, it was really nice. I especially liked the part in the soulscapes, a very nice heart to heart!

Robert H.

Fantastic! I just had a thought - I'd love to see Orario's reaction at the Hera Familia's sudden instantaneous transformation into heavenly beauties.

Jadin Jacobs

Cheem, I gotta say that you are great when it comes to writing emotional moments. I can feel the support they give each other through my screen. You do some excellent work.

Pope Yoda I

This chapter gave me diabetus. I love it. Too many writers shy away from feeling/writing about emotions. That said, I'd like to see if the MC is capable of sharing strands of his sword qi with Hera clan swordswomen and giving them a base from which to kick off their own cultivations. Or perhaps doing so merges into their levels and gives them interesting developmental abilities. I look forwarding to either MC or Hera parodying "Houston, we have liftoff!" when Dian shits out his organs so hard he sails through the sky on a stream of diarrhea. Maybe MC can poach one or two of that gods soon-to-be former familia? Or, you know, kick off an absolutely horrifying reputation that works in Hera's favor.

DALucifer

Also, I can guess which god we at killing to keep kirin around...

DALucifer

you have been placed on order list please take a ticket your order will be ready in 999999999 years due to delays delays include but are not limited to: hera bankrupting the familias treasury

Adventuring Hobbit

Hello? Yes, I would like one Meteria, please.


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