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Vol. 3 - Education - Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2019-01-24 13:18:42 +0000 UTC

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Heru Kane

NICE!!!!! Good stuff. Not too long and tedious but also not too short has to feel meaningless. I will state that the whole waiting for multiple people to go first what is kind of annoying and if I was the designers for the game I would need to send out an update to make it so dungeons can have multiple command rooms. Yan that it was a good battle and I look forward to seeing the result upon Him returning to the surface. I also really like him gaining the nanoscale that he got it's really brilliant. It kind of makes me want to know what would happen if he focused his magic a lot and cast Fireball. With the system basically giving him a very basic and inefficient spell because if so that would be really cool. My final comment is that I'm not really liking the loot system of the game. What I mean by that is I wish something like the letter armor fell or other things like that. It might be that this is just a starting dungeon so it's restricted in loot but still I think it would have been better if there were other loot items as well. Anyway, all in all, great series of chapters. A great way to write the Dungeons and the phase shift between past magitek training and the future wizard training. I can also clearly see that you wrote them all at once and that's also well done on that. Great flow, great writing, great story.


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