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The Phenex Rises (One Shot/Snippet)

🕑 Added 2024-08-24 22:16:06 +0000 UTC

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Cody S.

Well, you're in luck. There's currently a vote going on for what I'll write next and Fabricator is winning by a landslide. I should be writing a new chapter for that soon. Until then, you can read the ones that haven't been released on Fanfiction yet. Enjoy and welcome!

King_Gluttony

Just read this on Fanfic, which caused me to join. At first, I thought it was a rip-off of "Riser Phenex isn't a villain" by akikan40 from Webnovel. It has a similar storyline and rewards, so I'm sure you took some inspiration. Even so, it is far more well-written and interesting. Hope to see more of this and Fabricator.

Cody S.

Not sure why you feel that way, but alright. The normal blue hellfire is just hotter flames, like a blowtorch honestly. Nothing all that special. As for the Phoenix Devil Fruit's blue/yellow flames, that just standard for it.

Son-Of-Scorn

The blue fire stuff is cringry as fuck, completely threw me out of the story, up til that point I had no real issues other than how easily Riser outmanoeuvred Sirzechs which is so unrealistic it's painful

Cody S.

Thank you, I had a lot of fun writing it.

Cody S.

I'm glad you liked it!

Glitched Knights

Pretty damn good work Thomas. This was pretty enjoyable to read

McgiggletitsMadden23

I could totally read more of this

Cody S.

Explain what you mean by 'the other side' like more from Riser's point of view or something else?

Evening Star

Does make me think. This was fun but it does make me think that i'd love to see a fic, or a continuation of this, that more explores the other side of the story a bit more and into more of a proper "what if" story. Could be an OC taking Riser's place possibly or reincarnates as Riser, so OOC i think the term is?

Cody S.

Yeah, I wasn't expecting to write this, but there it is. And my left hand is feeling much better thanks! Though now my right thumb is being a bit of a dick, so that's fun! Pro tip, don't get old. XD

WarElf

I gotta say unexpected and I haven't seen a lot of reincarnated as Riser stories but I really like it and hope to see more and I also hope your hand is doing better

Cody S.

I dunno, I haven't really read any myself. I've heard of a couple though, maybe I should check them out. I'm sure I can get this past 3 chapters, just not too soon. Maybe I'll try alternating this and Game Master for a bit. Clearly this story is something you all are interested in given the sheer number of comments and likes!

StrevHd

How is it every story I read with a good Riser stars off a banger. I know this is not a priority, but hopefully this gets more updates because another constant of these stories is they never get past like 3 chapter.

Cody S.

Right?

DALucifer

if i wasn't so invested in game master...

Cody S.

Glad to hear it since I blame the entire chapter on you. XD

Cody S.

I dunno. Maybe? I definitely did NOT think that far ahead on this one. lol.

Cody S.

Well... with this story it probably would be a mix of game-breaking and just normally useful. It would definitely be an OP MC pretty rapidly. Though, and this is important, he doesn't have instant mastery of the stuff he got. So the ice powers of the Demons Extract? He has them and can use the basics super easily, but stopping time like Esdeath could would take a lot of effort to earn.

maddmann1991

i reckon that was great and thoroughly enjoyed it!

Bio_Bill

Now Rias decides to make it up to Riser so Sirzech's is now able to positively influence their relationship.

BookDragonling

Fun little one-shot. If it was turned into a story I'd hope that any system wouldn't be tossing out gamebreaking rewards left and right tho. It's always more fun (to me) to see the MC work for his gains.

Cody S.

I'm sure I can get a chapter of it done here and there. Not 100% sure where to take it from here though.

SilverWolf

Same

SilverWolf

I love this story idea would hope to see more of it if you do end up making it into a actual story

ParaPhone

That was amazing. Would love to see this continued.


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