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The Mad Doctor of One Piece - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2025-03-08 03:00:43 +0000 UTC

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King_Gluttony

I don't care either way if he wants a purely female crew, but if so, couldn't he just create a kind of gender bending potion and intergrate it into the homunculous process? In that way, he isn't really limited based just chosing beautiful female characters. At the same time, if them to all be his prospects for his harem rather than just eye candy, he could similarly add a potion that ensures they are attracted to men (specifically to him feels far too rapey).

Cody S.

Pretty famous; he had a bounty of 550,000,000 before he died in canon. He'd been on the sea for years before Luffy left. Then, he joined Whitebeard and became one of his commanders. So, yeah, pretty darn famous, I would hazard. If I recall correctly, even Nami and Zoro had heard of Ace and were shocked he was Luffy's brother.

Alexander Brown

So Ace is already famous now?

Finn Ryan

I really liked this but still preferred the one where the buy ate the bomb devil fruit

Cody S.

Alright, let's take this from the top. I don't plan to limit his ability to get materials. I've actually already introduced the limiting factor, proper equipment. This will continue to be his limiting factor going forward. He has no idea just how complex something like Kryptonian Blood will be to work with. Even more so if he only wants snippets of the genetic code to give himself specific abilities. The only place I could imagine something like an electron microscope existing would be Egghead Island. So, while he CAN he's limited by the technology of the world. Without something like Essence of the Crafter, he can't make the gear he needs to move forward. He will be experimenting with Devil Fruits. We already know things like the SMILEs exist and are created by the chemical SAD. There's no way that Peter can't make an even better process to produce superior products. It will only require him to get his hands on just one Devil Fruit first. Bombs and Trick bullets will be his shtick when it comes to combat. That's why I gave him the only known type of Revolver in the game. As a revolver, it requires more modern bullets and will allow him to make custom ammo. It'll work until he can make a superior weapon. As for traveling with Luffy and them, not as a crew member. He'll probably join Luffy's Armada and fight by his side on the big stuff like Big Mom and Kaido. I do plan for him to have a fully homunculus crew, probably all female just because he CAN. Like you said, any Saber from fate would be a skilled swordsman. Or melee fighters from Baki. Or all kinds of people from all kinds of media that could be pulled in. Just, keep in mind, they wont have their original memories. Even if he perfectly clones them with their blood samples, he has no way to give them their original memories. They would merely have their natural talents and have to build up from their base.

Cody S.

Awesome!

Cody S.

thanks!

Cody S.

Nah. I just need to sit down when I have some time to re-read Fabricator to make sure I'm not repeating myself. It's an issue I ran into in my Original story from it going so long.

Loghead101

Hmmm, out of all of your other One Piece stories, this is the one I desperately hope you continue with rather than have it get left in the dust. However, I do think that it needs just one little nerf before it could go forward and that would be to limit certain ingredients to the respective universe. I’m all for Peter to be able to grab just about any actual material; mundane, magical or otherwise. But when he is described as being able to obtain blood and tissue samples from beings that are so wholly out there compared to One Piece like Kryptonians, Saiyans and other Gods then I think that’s going a bit to far and to easily. Especially since One Piece is already a big old melting pot of different races that could already serve enough as material and essences in question. He could working with Lunarians, Giants, Oni, Fishmen hell even aliens and still make his way to the top. He could also try experimenting with devil fruits and achieve some stellar things with that. And even if he can’t actually smith and craft worth a damn that doesn’t mean he can’t find an experienced crafter like Franky, Vegapunk or whoever else and just give them materials to build whatever you could possibly want. He could make vibranium wings and shield, adamantium and mythril armor and weapons, all sorts of bombs and trick bullets, drugs that induce powerful effects. He doesn’t need to become a living god ‘yet’ to turn all of One Piece on its head. I would say to limit actual race samples to what’s natural to the world. Some stuff can be saved for later. Like Devils, Angels and Gods for DxD. Other than that I do have some questions. Is he going to end up joining the Strawhats or make his own crew? And if he makes his own crew then will he just try to make copies of current people before modifying them or will he make some expy characters from other media and just try to fit them into the world of One Piece. Like if he wants a swordsman then he could do any one of the Sabers from Fate. Cause I see great future for a waifu crew. Loved the snippet and I desperately hope to see more of it man, it’s an idea too good to let rest.

McgiggletitsMadden23

Super excited for this

Austin

Love it so far

Alexander Brown

I’m getting the distinct feeling that I’ll die before I get to read the ending of your DXD fabricator story. 😮‍💨 Nice new story though


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