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The Mad Doctor of One Piece - Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2025-03-14 20:46:34 +0000 UTC

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Cody S.

Thinking of a crew name is hard as hell. I'm not huge on Gilde Cauldron either, and just plain Cauldron feels too much like ripping off the Worm fandom. I am open to suggestions that fit. Given the route Luffy and the others took, their not running into too many people trying to enslave them makes more sense. There's also the male to female ratio. There's only Robin and Nami, the rest of the crew is men. It might be sexist, but women are viewed as weaker so Peter's crew, by extension, would look weaker and, therefore, make an easier target. Peter really only wants to hit Arabasta to meet Ace. He knows Luffy can deal with Crocodile, so he doesn't much care to interfere. Though he might watch events unfold for fun. Admiral Cain suffered from something many Marines suffer from: arrogance. Even if he was an ex-marine, it would have been a large part of his personality as an Admiral. He also drastically underestimated Peter. Keep in mind, Peter is only 17 and looks it. He's not some huge, ripped murder hobo monster that would make people cautious at a glance. On top of that, his bounty hasn't been issued quite yet, so he's a 'nobody' by Grand Line standards. Throw in his Essence letting him summon Seastone at will, and he's a nightmare for any Devil Fruit user that underestimates him. I thought long and hard about the fruit I wanted Cain to have and its ability. Eventually, I couldn't make up my mind, so I used a random generator. XD That's just what came up and since I'd already decided Cain was an ex-marine, he had to become an ex-admiral. No way some no-name marine had a Logia! Yes, he extracted the essence of the Devil Fruit. You'll see what he does with it in the next chapter. As for who will get it... It will not be Peter, as he's got his eyes set on the Mera Mera no Mi. I've always liked fire, so... As for Mera, she has full on Hydokinesis. If she'd been with Peter and the others she could have literally drown Cain and his First Mate without even breaking a sweat. She is death incarnate when she has access to enough water. Unless something makes me want to end the story early, there will be no zombie viruses in the story. XD

Loghead101

Hmm, admittedly I’m not the biggest fan of the Gilded Cauldron Pirates, but I don’t have any good alternative so I will concede. Maybe at least take out the gilded part then it would roll off the tongue better but that’s as far as I would go. And oh boy it’s gonna be a running theme of the enemy trying to enslave all the woman on the crew. I get it but still, I can’t remember if Nami or Robin had to deal with this a lot aside from the obvious ones like that one dude from Thriller Bark that tries to marry Nami by force. Hopefully the crew can eventually make it to Alabasta and get involved in some of the events. As funny as I find it for them to resolve the whole conflict before Vivi and the StrawHats make it to shores I wouldn’t want Peter to steal too much of Luffy’s thunder. Crocodile was a big step up for all of them. And seriously, sure he might have been an admiral but he was talking a whole lot of shit for someone who practically had a foot in the grave. Maybe the obelisk had something to do with their long lives? Also was that growth how Peter will extract Devil Fruits? Rather than get a fruit he somehow takes the essence? Also the Wind Wind fruit?!?!? Considering all the crap one can do with wind that has to be busted as all hell! If Peter doesn’t want it then who would best have it? Maybe Mera, she does have some minor water manipulation if I remember right. Something that just comes with being an Atlantean. Combine them both and she could control storms and it’s bound to help with her duties as a navigator. Also I feel it’s just a matter of when till somebody pisses Peter off before he goes full Mad Doctor and creates some abomination to wreak havoc on his foes. I say this because I’ve been replaying an oldie but a goodie again and I had the thought of after Peter eventually evacuates all of Ivankov’s group as well as the few good individuals from Impel Down, he releases an altered version of the Harran Virus on the prison. What would a One Piece Volatile look and act like. Anyway, great stuff man! Can’t wait for more.


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