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Fabricator: Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2023-03-07 16:31:32 +0000 UTC

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ShadowStalker1228

I do love me a pseudo time-skip! Thanks for the chapter!

Cody S.

I'll take that as a compliment. lol. On average my chapters are around 3-3.5k words on their first pass. By the time they hit Fanfiction.net they can be upwards of 4k words. Translated into paperback pages, that's around 12-14 pages per chapter. I think that's above average for most stories. Fortunately, this is the last bit before we hit canon hard in the story and things should pick up the pace considerably as Junichiro sticks his nose into things. Chapters should have 'more bang for their buck' from that point on and feel more fulfilling. I think. Lemme know if they're not!

King hand axe

The story is enjoyable and will continue to enjoy the training montages going on. Only suggestion is to perhaps delay each chapter so they're a little longer?. They feel, kinda, underwhelming when it comes to the length and rather than saying "I can't wait for more", I feel a little like saying "that was it?" For each chapter


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