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Biokinetic - Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2023-05-18 02:28:33 +0000 UTC

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ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Yeah I agree too that’s why I like proactive fan fics where he actually trains before getting one for all because I doubt he even knows how to throw a punch properly

ShadowStalker1228

Thanks for the chapter! Oh no! Can he extend Izuku's life? And maybe clean up his quirk in his body a bit, y'know optimize it. I can't help but like Izuku honestly even if I agree with you on how he wasted 10 years moping around

ShadowStalker1228

I somewhat agree, his quirk is very dangerous and immediately exposing it to Aoyama even of he's unwilling does rub me the wrong way.

Alex I

I wasn't that bothered by the description, it makes sense. But it did very much bother me that he just shouted about being able to 'see' people's quirks in front of an unwilling spy for the guy he's been shitting himself over all this time... It just feels janky and rushed and seems to be using the typical plot armor of shounen stories that NONE of these teenagers are going to gossip and AfO somehow won't hear about it. And if he does it's gonna frankly tank this book because you've pulled the main villain into the spotlight way too soon or you have to contrive some reason why he doesn't act.


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