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Fabricator v2 - Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2023-06-29 15:01:38 +0000 UTC

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greatGUARDIAN100

He gestured down the driveway they were standing in, “The road is about a hundred meters that way.” Junichiro blinked incredulously as he looked down the driveway, “Three hundred meters?! How big is the property?!” 100 turning into 300 in the above section. Thanks for the chapter! Feels like his home had to either be somewhere significant to the original plot or out in the middle of nowhere but then you'd lack character interaction. Kuoh is perfect!

Cody S.

It wasn't so much about the money, though that was important, as it was about the six months of effort to make and sell items that went into earning that money. Then poof! All gone for just a small number of magical ingots. It was more of a "this is the difference" kind of thing. Money is less likely to play a role in the future when it comes to items of real value and rarity. I just can't imagine someone with a scale from Ddraig's original body would be willing to exchange such an item for something as mundane as cash/gold/jewels, you know? High tier materials will end up being through barter. As for Mittelt, anything is possible because I, honest to god, didn't plan to use her. She's also got like ZERO background information so I can essentially do whatever I want with her. Which is nice!

King hand axe

Another really enjoyable chapter, I have a hard time predicting the twists which is great. Knew Azazel would be smug but also a decent guy, but never saw Mittelt coming tho. Maybe a future enchanted amulet for her to make her looks/feel older?, or even a alchemy potion to help her age?. Glad to see he's taken a big step forward with the tools and equipment, I was once told by an amazing wood crafter that "a poor craftsmen blames his tools but Master craftsmen can" always stuck with me about how once you reach the high levels its the tools that can make all the difference. Looking forward to seeing what he can come up with now. Still like the idea of him joining Rias, love the thought of him providing kick ass Armour/weapons for them. I like the use of money as a measurement to how rare/expensive something is but also caution against getting trapped in a scale however it doesn't seem likely with how well you've done so far.

Cody S.

Yeah, I pounded this chapter out in about 2 hours so it might be a bit rougher than usual. As for Mittelt, I was wondering what Fallen Angel to use, thinking I'd just make an OC. But then I saw her on the wiki and was like 'She had like, 2 lines in the anime and was just a name in the manga, why don't I use her? Also, the fact she'd look the same age as shota Juni is just funny!" And there it was, one liaison. And definitely pre-canon, Rias will show up in... about a year and a half, give or take. I don't plan to stretch the pre-canon chapters out too much, but I am having a ton more fun with the world building for this version of Juni, so it might take a bit before he caves in Riser's skull. I also don't want to make him so OP that Kokobiel is a curb stomp, so I got a balancing act to do here. FUN! (not sarcasm)

Dave

Great chapter as usual. I was surprised at seeing Mittelt as the liaison. The fact that it is pre cannon was a good move, lots of time for him to grow and improve. I don’t have any problem with him joining Rias, I feel that with him there you can quite easily change things up. Also, I assume he is going to interact with other pantheons, is that only going to be for materials or would you go more in-depth and explore said pantheons. I had noticed only a couple of sentences which could get reworked, just a missing word and such, just to make it smooth reading.


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