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Fabricator v2 - Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2023-07-02 18:35:33 +0000 UTC

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greatGUARDIAN100

"seen it happen a countless number of times both before and after her* fall from grace over the course of millennia." Thanks for the chapter!

Ichigo Uzumaki

I have to say having him face this kind of tragedy this early in the story seem pretty dumb! I mean you already made him as weak as you possibly can and now this. I get giving him obstacles to overcome, but they should be scaled appropriately! While your previous rendition was overpowered this one is way underpowered. It is the literary equivalent to nails on a chalkboard. You either need to scale him up quickly or the obstacles down.

Dante777Apocalypse

Azazel IS a goddamn artificier madman. Finding someone with that level of ability and talent in an untrained teenager it would be weird if he didn't immediately test his skills and take him as a protégé. Not because he's nice (he isn't) but because he's greedy for talent. For him an untrained artificier prodigy would be far more valuable than any sacred gear user there's no way he would leave his safety to chance or even put the mc a child in a dangerous situation to test it, would be too much of a gamble (especially without proper supervision).Besides his knowledge should ring alarm bells in his mind making him think that even if GOB is dead mc could somehow be related to Him considering the BS the gods in dxd pull off (cloning nerfed heavenly dragons and self resurrection with power of faith being a few). I mean give the guy some credit he runs the most well connected faction in the Judeo Christian religion, one cannot do so without patience and long term vision and progressive thinking despitehis goofy appearance. His little 'plan' and subsequent hiccup seemed too childish for someone who's run an organization for over a millenia minimum.


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