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Fabricator v2 - Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2023-08-08 16:58:38 +0000 UTC

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King hand axe

Truth be told, I kinda found it a little hard to read? I don't know if it's the formatting or the subject in the chapter but I ended up kinda glazed over by the end. I'm just not sure where he goes from here? Is there going to be loads of chapter about him making really minor things in a location completely controlled and observed by someone else. Would he not be just chained to the wall sometime soon now that it's clear he's making stuff no one else can?. How is he going to escape? If he leaves, what was the point in signing up in the first place?. He's clearly going to need to escape, take everything with him, work on a disguise that can fool everyone till he's strong enough that a faction leader won't be able to beat him, or find something he can use against Azazel so he will leave him alone, otherwise why would he ever not be forced into working for the fallen angels forever. Azazel doesn't even need to imprison him, just get some of his weapons, attack the other factions while releasing a picture of him stating me made it and is working for them. Poof, there goes any chance of ever working with others, and Azazel has clearly already shown a ruthlessness to him that would do just that. Honestly, in my opinion, this might have been a mistake, making him work for the fallen angels and it is work for NOT with at this point... hes in a location controlled by someone with a warden watching over him, everything he does being recorded and he lost an arm. I think I'd have rather him abandoned the junkyard, found a new secret location, set up a neutral meeting ground and talked with Azazel about what he needs and what he'll trade for it. Disappears back to his hideout, comes back with what ever he has been contracted to make etx. I just feel like this has taken a wrong turn?.


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