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Fabricator v2 - Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2023-11-07 21:52:48 +0000 UTC

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greatGUARDIAN100

"She pushed a button on the console* and, in response, magic circles sprang to life all over the walls, floor, and ceiling of the room."

Jimmy Golden

Great chapter, I personally prefer the longer chapters myself.

King hand axe

I both liked it and didn't. The chapter length was great and the interactions with Kiba were good. But his currently personality/ monotone act is making it very difficult to see any development of romance in the story, now if Romance is off the table then great but as is, every interaction with women is stilted and somewhat lazy and he still comes across as an asshole. There were alot of way he could have gone about explaining why he wants /needs the protection of a contract but instead he came across as a Beta male trying to sound aggressive in negotiations


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