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Fabricator v2 - Chapter 32

🕑 Added 2023-12-01 02:06:11 +0000 UTC

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King_Gluttony

Question: Is Junichiro using his wands and such to analyze the Essence of the Blank? Don't get me wrong; I doubt he could fully understand it. Even so, you have to admit that as an Artificer who makes potions, it should pique his interest, and give him a goal to reach. This is especially so when the Essence would give him limitless potential, meaning that should he find subsitue ingredients (almost impossible, but not completely), it should be possible to make something with a similar effects.

Cody S.

I honestly hadn't though of the emotion damper, so thanks for the wonderful idea! As for Yasaka, I could totally see her as an older sister/friendly tease toward Junichiro. Especially after Junichiro helps her protect Kunou, which is something I did have planned. But definitely not more than that. Way too big of an age gap and I'm not the type to have Junichiro just building a harem of every hot/awesome woman in the series. For now, monogamous with Rias. In the future? One or two might join the group.

Cody S.

I'm honestly fuzzy on the details on why Barakiel didn't find Akeno myself. But I do know that Akeno was out in the world living on her own for over a year before Rias recruited her. During that year she was using her power to exorcise spirits to make something of a living. So, if he does have a reason for not finding her, it better be one HELL of a good one. I honestly can't remember him ever even giving one, so we'll see what happens with that relationship and how it all is effected moving forward.

Gpno14

Always a good day when u get to read more of this story. And Akeno did deserve to be told off to get her head straight. It's for her own good. Tho I do still like akeno. Perhaps you'd consider letting her into the relationship between main man and rias? After Akeno goes through some changes to be a bit better suited. Perhaps you could say that her sadist tendencies were stemming from her hatred of fallen and that she always imagined it was a fallen she was torturing. If she got over her blanket hate, maybe that would go away too? And it's been a while since I brushed up on dxd, but was it ever revealed why her dad didn't come get her? What if when he heard what happened to his family, Barquiel looked for Akeno only to find out the was already with Rias? I can't imagine it would be easy to get to her at that point, being close to the sister of the current Lucifer. Maybe he wanted to go to her but just couldn't?

King hand axe

I really enjoyed both interactions with Akeno and Rias, one for character development and the other for a wholesome interaction. I'm happy that the change has started to happen and the time it took to get there, with the tools he's amassed, he'll be very strong but not OP, not considering he doesn't have plot armor and the enemies coming. Something he could make is an Emotion damper for Gasper, it activates when it senses a panicked state of emotion, a bit like a bootleg Gamer mind, wont affect the other emotions but will help stop him from accidently activating his SG and will have the added benefit of allowing him to study the SG and give Rias another set of really positive emotions towards Junichiro. With regards toward future relationships, for a love interest or simply a close friend, a easy avenue is for Yasaka to reach out to the Artificer for either help with the wards of her home or a protection/teleportation device for Kunou. I think his Training for Rias should be just a stolen version of all the best attacks for DBZ, i mean it would be really funny and effective.


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