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Fabricator v2 - Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2023-12-31 02:12:31 +0000 UTC

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King_Gluttony

Random question: Is there a way to turn his essense granted abilities into devil traits? If we ignore the knowledge that it grants, even the most basic functions of the Essense of the Artificer have great potential to create a Devil clan of the best crafters. As for Essnse of the Blank, that would be OP for a clan trait, but also too excessive.

CMCC1012

I see you fixed the fabrication copies that havnt been released for a year while not fixing the payed copies. I like the story but reading unedited chapters a year old that are not fixed isn’t the best

CMCC1012

What’s with the 3 different times bringing up the engagement

Church22

Since his stealing the boasted gear has already served it’s main purpose in removing Issei from the story it would be cool if he just made a body for drag and released him from the cycle of reincarnation of sacred gears. I mean theirs a lot of cool new angles to go with sword birth but boasted gear is kind of played out. He could have a BFF for life in a heavenly dragon and let’s just face it the coolest thing about Juni is the Artificer ability and everything it will eventually be capable of so it’s not really needed

Cody S.

Yeah, thanks again for the heads up, I did fix the issue with Riser being brought up so much on the public release versions as well as the thing with Akeno already being told. Had to do some rewriting but I think the chapter turned out better for it. As for the Gasper thing, I'll double check that! These versions didn't get updated but when they go live you'll be able to see the changes. Finding issues like this so you guys can smack me to fix it is part of why I love Patreon. ^_^

Alex I

Have to say, it is annoying reading these chapters again and getting smacked in the face with the plot rolling back. The MCs been told about the engagement 3 times now and Akeno was already told his identity at the end of the previous chapter. Please either fix these plot holes or add an author's note addressing them and fix them before you release the chapters to the public. Because these kind of mistakes will have internet trolls eating you alive...

greatGUARDIAN100

Okay, found a pretty big mistake (I think). I am pretty sure that this is the third time you have had Rias reveal that she is betrothed to Riser while it mentions that the MC has no real reason to know this. The first during the sceme where he actually signs the contract with Rias, the second sometime after that (during the previous chapter I think but not the same one as the contract signing) which I think might have been in a scene in the workshop and a third time this chapter. Guessing it was due to the time between chapters that caused it. Other than that just finished binge reading the story and cant wait for more!

Jimmy Golden

Love this story!!

Dstar 17

You’ve said rias is engaged to riser and that mc has to act like he doesn’t know three times already when rias has already told him twice now.

Troy Malloy

Love the second half

GrayWolf

Love the second half that you added on. I’m going to guess it was Ajuka who made the request.

SilverWolf

Thanks for the chapter, glad your back an well.

Troy Malloy

Thanks for the chapter

Glitched Knights

Hope everything goes okay with your mom

King hand axe

An enjoyable chapter. Thanks!

Cody S.

I promise, if I ever quit writing, I'd at least say something. Anything else would be stealing from you guys.

BookDragonling

YAAAAAAAA!

emahue64

yay i was afraid you quit


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