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The Road to Greatness: One Quirk at a Time - Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2024-01-21 00:52:18 +0000 UTC

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Cody S.

Then it looks exactly like I was going for! Neito has a tiny bit of an inferiority complex and ends up being a dick because of it. Keep in mind, even if he has memories of another life, he's lived the last 15 in the MHA world with classmates who HATED and FEARED his Quirk and what it could do. Even if you've got the mentality of an adult, ten years of your peers treating you badly will leave a mark. The original Neito was a dick for a legitimate reason. He'll get over it, and he is planning to help the class in the next chapter I'm working on. But he's still got some growing to do. It's not fun if the MC is perfect from the get go.

Jimmy Golden

Really liked this chapter!! The only small complaint I have, is that the MC seems to forget that his classmates are still kids at times and is quick to judge and write them off like adults. Such as when he said he wouldn’t care if either Midoriya or Bakugo would die during battle training. When he should be mentally old enough to wish to help them learn and grow up to be better people and heroes. Because the way he acts towards them now, it kinda makes him look like a self entitled prick with a better than you complex. But besides that keep up the amazing work!!

Cody S.

Well, aside from the big throw down between Bakugo and Midoriya, there wasn't all that much to take away from this section of the canon. Since I randomized things, it got even worse since the team were so damned one sided. Everyone in 1-A deserves to be there, but it's just fact that a few of them are just plain stronger than the rest. If the teams were preselected for balance, it would have gone a lot better. As just one example, Kirishima Vs. Sato, Defense Vs. Strength. I think both of them could have learned something fighting each other. So, I'll have some fun with stuff like that in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

Lictor Magnus

Really appreciate you highlighting how terrible the teachers and mentors are in MHA and giving them some actual pushback. So many self inserts go yeah they suck but I’m not going to do anything about it. Also like that you covered this arc in a single chapter. Most of the fanfics I’ve read starch this way too long for what was a few chapters in the manga and like two episodes in the anime.


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