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Saundarya Sanjeevani Issue 3 Page 11 (with and without text)
🕑 Added 2025-07-26 19:49:44 +0000 UTCSorry for uploading late, but good work takes time!
As you can see, I have changed the dialogues, and the narrative to some extent. Without giving much spoilers, I am trying to keep it more real instead of going into more fantasy, which means no transformation with Rajiv and Kishore, BUT, we get to see more of how Kamla living life as a wife and dealing with her new emotions and situations with society as a woman. I felt uncertain with the way the comic was going, hence I took the decision to keep it grounded. It has been great working on this project, and I don't want to rush anything. Earlier it was two pags, but I will add an extra page of them having sex before it ends, to add more depth to Karamchand's brainwashing into becoming more Kamla.
Comments
Bewci
Working on it! After much thought, I believe it to be the best version. I would love to share, but I don't want to give spoilers!
IslandLivin
This was great, I am enjoying the change. It seems like a mental change is coming soon and I am hyped for it. Looking forward to the next page!
