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Hay Lin sprite

🕑 Added 2018-11-24 16:43:12 +0000 UTC

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Maybe smaller boobs? Just reduced by one size?

Александр

неплохо

Ronaldo garaway

The controls for the Android version

Если сравнивать с мультом, то она вроде как самая стройная из всех, а у вас получилась немного "сбитая-накаченная" что ли. Ну и лицо - брови по моему толстоваты, нос какой-то больно мужской-грубоватый, оттенок кожи слегка контрастирует с общим оттенком кожи(вроде желтоват что ли)?

Looks ready for a good dicking~

Good job but Hay Lin has more separate eyes and a smaller triangle nose.

Mario Belenguer Gomez

there is something in the neck and hair around it, that I just do not like, it may be a bit too long and the eyebrows I think should be a little thinner. For the rest, good work, this is great.

Nose... Yeah. somethig is wrong with her nose

Name Name

Also, she just overall doesn't share the playful/mischievous look of the original.

Name Name

It doesn't look bad, but also doesn't seem to resemble the actual character very much (Her nose and eyebrows are much larger here, and her facial features don't really match the original... She doesn't really look Asian anymore, honestly, and she's less "petite" than she was in the cartoon).

Mikael

I like it keep her as is

имхо, она просто так стоит.

Мне кажется или у нее одна грудь больше другой?

Terro Deryu

the light hit her just right

Darkwolf

Her facial appearance needs softening, I look at her and she seems a tad stiff. Hay Lin is supposed to appear rather bubbly pretty much all the time, the sprite doesn't really convey that to me as is.

unclefester84

Hmm, a bit skinnier maybe...

May be a little bit more Frizzy hair?

Sommion

yeah, she had delicious flat chest

Cosplayerin

looks great :)

DanishSnufkin

She appears a bit too busty. Not an expert on the subject, but I would assume that she would have the smallest bosom of the guardians

Ven

Неплохо получилось, ну я думаю что было бы неплохо немного поменять прическу, с этой ее голова похожа на голову мальчика, ну а так даже неплохо! продолжай в том же духе!

lol32

nope¡¡

Saisaici

I like it, but could you mabye make her more skiny in the leg, butt, waist and chest. She look like a more beefy version of Hay Lin. And mabye make it so her hair behind her look like there are twin ponytails.