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Feedback form for Arc 3 map (Jikage Rising)
🕑 Added 2023-03-20 14:01:26 +0000 UTCHey all, so there was a bit of feedback for this map and I thought it would be best to have a dedicated post for it! So to start off, the map is going to be the village that the MC will be "managing". The building in the town are:
-Hospital
-Surveillance HQ
-Shopping district + weapons shop
-Hotsprings resort
-Ramen shop
-School/training centre
-Park
-Security/Barracks
So the feedback that I've sent so far are:
-The center building is a bit too too big compared to the rest of the town, maybe reduce the size a bit.
-The playground also seems a bit out of place, could you remove those and replace them with trees?
-The ninja on top of the training building is a bit silly, could you remove that please? The building style also seems a bit out of place, it appears too "western".
-The tower also appears too "western" and small.
-The weapon shop is very different from what's in the ref as well I think, it's supposed to be a shopping district where one of the buildings is a weapon shop.
-The hot spring resort seems to be missing
-The ramen shop is missing as well
-Not sure which one is the security building
-The town is also very empty, there should be some buildings in it to show that people are living there instead of just having some random buildings.
-The training area is also pretty unclear, it's supposed to be an area of it's own, not just one training dummy.
If there are any more feedback or issues that y'all have, do let me know and I'll have the artist fix it!
Comments
Great! don't rush tho prioritise on your life first . Have a good day bro/sis/miss/mister idk anymore lol
Smiling Dog
Got it, will feedback that!
just place the houses on every nearby tower or any in between just like arc 1-2 cus yknow it looks a bit 'empty'. Indeed the tower is pretty much larger since thats the main event happened there and i agree to make it small . What you think ?
Robot bug
i love it
