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Chapter 89: Hostile Takeover

🕑 Added 2023-06-14 15:11:01 +0000 UTC

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OpN

This is evil and dumb for evil and dumbs sake. His motivations are paper thin and he's not relatable as an antagonist in any way. He doesn't have any charm or charisma, there's no reason that this guy is the leader and that others haven't staged a coup. This is an awful villain and pure fantasy fulfillment that everyone your main character defeats is unsupportable evil. Don't make the main character someone who only does good things and everyone claps lmao, it's okay in the very short term but it's annoying if the enemy doesn't have supportable motives, making them all bit characters.

Philipp Gawol

Seems a bit out of character that he still supports the empire. He's clearly aware that the factions are pure bullshit. His current observation of human nature should've made him purge the fanatics from his ranks and move into a more accepting posture. They obviously failed their blitz, (admittedly due to a horrendous spawn) and sticking to an early-game strategy during mid-game is a death-sentence. He wouldn't have to cut ties with his faction, but reducing hostility and moving to a tall-ish strategy would be advisable. Relations with the rebels are irreparably damaged, meaning that he should give them supplies, a map and provide escorts to the edge of his territory. As long as he doesn't foster extreme hostility due to murdering relatives, he shouldn't have to worry about immediate retaliation with the way the world is. The longer the rebels stay, the more support they get and more of a threat they become. He has to inevitably move from a warfare-based strategy to a diplomatic approach, now that he failed to consolidate early. He's still a massive cock for not calling medics for his guards... and all the other stuff.

Charles handgis

I can’t really take this guy as a serious threat. If coop doesn’t curb stomp him after all his event gains it would be a bit disappointing.

tibbish

The MC is getting powerlevelled to be a 1 man world power during the wave while Jerry is mostly stroking his ego and engaging in bad faith performative nonsense because he can't even control the 'rabble' surrounding his base anymore. Dude is screwed and he doesn't know it.

Jason

hope this Jerry guy gets taken out soon

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

abowden

I really hope Coop assassinates this douche after the settlement event. It would be perfect timing, maybe get the assistance of his viceroy in recommending someone for the shard, if people don't want him to take it. BTW, I really can't wait for people's reactions to the faction and leveling leader-boards at the end of all this... And possibly during to, since Ghost reef is probably going to end last.

Jared Newton

I like that he added Supreme to his title. Such a despot thing to do. Thanks for the chapter.


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