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PotHQ: Chapter 12 (Draft)

🕑 Added 2022-01-19 18:28:57 +0000 UTC

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Exactly! The way the level system constrains the growth of the hive is actually one of the major roles it has for the story.

Alyssa Straßmann

Thanks also for this chapter XD "The most obvious difference to Regina was that they looked female. She wasn’t sure if that was coincidence, an integral feature of their different roles, or maybe even something she decided subconsciously when she picked those, but it didn’t matter much in practical terms." -> Which beggs the question what horrors of nature she might be able to create XD "Regina hung back, feeling like she didn’t have much to contribute." -> If it weren't for the level system, she probably wouldn't have anythign to do but laying more eggs. Which makes the narrative usage of it quite helpful. Also, if she was able to increase the Hive's size too quickly, we wouldn't get the character like in this chapter. All drones would be feel like replacable, well... drones.


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