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[TEA] (54) 2.5. Shard Struggle

🕑 Added 2025-06-19 16:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Stephen Swanson

Totally get it! Book 2 certainly starts off a bit slower for sure, but we shall get back to the stabbing before long haha

Stephen Swanson

Glad to hear! That was pretty much exactly what I was aiming for, so I'm certainly glad that's how it came across to you haha

Lucinda

I know some dislike the romantic side of the book, however, I find I like it! Usually I don't care for romance aspects either but, with the way the book is progressing, it helps show the MC isn't just a murder hobo and actually has something he cares for. It grounds him and also shows the audience a different side, one that he is willing to kill/die over.

Denis

Enjoying the story but these chapters that are majority relationship based are tiresome. It seems like every chapter is a few paragraphs of something interesting followed by the rest of the chapter being either sex, relationship talk, thinking about the relationship and so forth. Nothing against Samantha but I joined for the MC doing interesting things not talking to his girlfriend who is pretty bland. Hopefully we can get back to theme like the city arc.


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