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(69) 2.22. A Hidden Village

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 17:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Stephen Swanson

Glad to hear, thanks!

Achon

The fix reads really well, great change!

Stephen Swanson

I see what you mean haha. Thanks for the catch, I've fixed the paragraph!

Achon

“Granted, we don’t see many people at all hidden away as we are in our village, so that’s not too surprising I suppose." This may need restructuring, or possibly split into separate sentences. `we don’t see many people at all hidden away as we are in our village` It could read as if the people that she is referring to are hidden away, rather than the village itself. I had to double back and go a bit slower after my first read haha.


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