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(95) 2.48. Extinguished

🕑 Added 2025-02-19 17:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Stephen Swanson

Yeah that's a good point. Thanks for the suggestion, it has been fixed!

Cazitron

Considering it's a description of what's happening rather than a person talking or sharing thoughts, the repetition doesn't make much sense.

Stephen Swanson

It was supposed to be in this case! Do you think it would be better without the repetition?

Cazitron

Even so… Even so, he felt rooted to the spot, as though he couldn’t bring himself to leave the site of Alka’s true death. Is "Even so" supposed to be repeated?


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