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Syl: Chapter 153

🕑 Added 2024-08-07 12:00:09 +0000 UTC

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87894354

It's not quite right yet. Sorry. "I could see the faint traces of something long ending in a three-pronged spear" It's not something long ending in a three-pronged spear. It's either a three-pronged spear, or it's a something long ending in three prongs.

Lunadea

Thanks! Yeah it probably should have been three-pronged spear.

87894354

Thanks for the chapter. Syl now knows that the creature doesn't have fire affinity, so maybe next chapter will involve some barbecued seafood. Illusion for the next floor? That would certainly be educational. And extremely interesting. Illusion does sound like a good counter to Syl's ability to obliterate targets. On the other hand, Syl's biology makes her highly resistant to sneak attacks (an ambusher can't stab you in the heart if you don't have a heart!). She also has a *lot* of different sensory abilities. "I could see the faint traces of something long ending in a tripoint in the blurry torsos hands." torsos -> torso's Also, not sure about tripoint. A tripoint isn't another word for 3 points. A tripoint is the word for 1 point where 3 things meet. Also, the sentence structure could be read as there being something long in their hands, and this long thing ends in a tripoint. *Or* it could mean that there's something long, and that it ends in a tripoint, and this ending is in their hands.

Engineer4God

Tank oo fur da chap!

crazybot

tftc

Shai182

Something to Do after the Fight, in the Fight Melt it ALL 😈👺

Daniel Mountain

Yeah, but then you have to fix the road underneath.

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Hector Gregorio

well level up is always good

CataFlan

Illusion! Time to lvl up this resistance and catch Trixie unprepared!

Freya

Tyftc

Shai182

TFTC! What road Blocks, everything can be Melted!


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