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Bookbound Bunny: Chapter 4 - 6

🕑 Added 2025-01-02 07:47:16 +0000 UTC

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SapientX

"father, outraged and grief-struck, left; never to be seen again" - this sounds like an OOC thought for someone in this situation. And "grief-struck" just sounds like an awful justification attempt anyway. I suggest : "for reasons she couldn't fathom" instead. This is not a person in her life.

Irakli Jishkariani

Yeah they are suspicious. If it is follower/faith thing then gods wouldn't want magic to exist I guess. Cause it gives mortals power to eventually defy them

Irakli Jishkariani

Cute protagonist. I like it ☺️☺️☺️

Marquess

Back in the first chapter, he wrote a spell that gathered and stored mana... That was (potentially) several thousand years ago now. Is the lack of magic related to the gods somehow, or did he simply store it all in his sleep?

Neuos.t

Death to the gods.

Diego Rossi

From what I know demi is more "partially" than half. Partially human doesn't sound so nice as it makes the human part more important. On the other hand, if there are a lot of mixed subspecies, every one with a different "other" part, and the only common part is being partially human, it is hard to find a different name for the whole group. It changes when a different species intermingles with several other races. If you think about D&D 3rd edition, that game has half dragons, that are dragons mixed with plenty of other creatures, from humans, to armadillos, half celestianls, angels mixed, again, with plenty of humanoids, haf fiends, demon and devils mixed with different creatures, and so on. In a setting where there are multiple half or demi groups it tends to lose the negative aspect of the term.

phillip page

Gonna be that guy for a sec. The lesser connotation of demi is a modern fashion. Demi as a prefix originally means half , or in part. I've always found the idea that a being can be lesser because they have a different origin to be quite sad, and that so many fail to see that the separation of personhood based on traits is a mirror of our own history. I digress. Demis seems a perfect name for races that share a common half.

Wensber

Thanks for the chapter! If I had a nickel for every story I'm reading with a bunny girl wielding magic, I'd have two nickels, which isn't a lot but its neat it happened twice.

Wensber

Considering that humans are a minority, they might not think of demihumans are less than human.

BeepBoop

"The broad races were eventually called Demihumans" sad to see this story keeps the "less than human" nomenclature

Engineer4God

Tank oo fur da chaps!


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