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Bookbound Bunny: Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2025-01-23 08:15:01 +0000 UTC

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Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

mbncd

Thank you for the chapter!

Marquess

Arakil, too, expects something will go wrong. That’s why he has so many backups!

Jeanean

Good thing then that this plan fulfills both criteria. What with Arakil planing to deceive Lily... (Yes, I know, its well intentioned.)

Sup3r J4k3

They're insane! They keep planting red flags every chance they can! At this point, I'd be more surprised if nothing went wrong!

Kail311

You're right, the "characters have/explain a plan but the readers don't know it" is the other classic trope. The problem some stories have is when they make subverting a trope the main reason for the story: "You thought you knew what was going to happen but you're wrong! I'm so smart for doing the opposite of what's expected." Or a subversion is so overused it has basically become the new standard: "You see that holy church of good and nice things? Surprise! It's actually all evil and bad, no one could ever have seen that coming, wow!" Another overused subversion is "The hero's party are actually all horrible bad guys, wow, isn't that a twist?". Granted, I read a lot of Japanese/Korean stories and if one person has a new idea, then 20 people copy it in some way once it's popular.

RainbowCatTopHat

Yeah the classic tropes are that: (1) If a plan is explained in detail, it will almost always go wrong somehow. And (2) If a plan is not explained (to the audience), then it will likely succeed. These might be tropes that show up in a ton of media (and maybe feel a bit cliche), but there's reasons for that. Consider the opposites: Where a plan is explained in detail and then works as described. In that case the author just described the same thing to the audience twice without any deviations and it feels unnecessary and long winded. And in the other example, if a plan fails when it was never explained to the audience then it can be confusing since the audience can't tell why or how the plan failed. You can make the opposites work in a story (as with basically any idea written well enough), but typically the story flows better if you stick to the tropes. They are well used for a reason.

Engineer4God

Tank oo fur da chap!

Mrfacemanlol

Someone is going to find the ritual site and shit themselves due to the thousand year old inscription

Fi

Tftc ❤️

CataFlan

TFTC! Anxious about the ritual.

crazybot

Pretty chill chapter. The pedestal is cool.

Kail311

I have thought of a (probably not new) term: Reader's Cynicism; as a reader we read so many stories and see/ come to expect common tropes and trends so we read with the idea that we have a general idea of how the story will unfold and are waiting to be proven right. I say this because every time there is a thorough and well thought out plan, it almost always goes wrong to the point where it's expected so reading this is like waiting for their house of cards to fall apart. This isn't a criticism of this story, if anything it's a criticism of myself. I'm reading and waiting for everything to go horribly wrong when it may not. Whatever the outcome, I'm loving the concept, characters, setting and look forward to every update. The Arakil prologue has so much potential to cause problems later on, lol.

Shai182

TFTC! Shenanigans Incoming!

Wensber

Thanks for the chapter!


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