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Grand Game 583: Transference

🕑 Added 2025-02-25 21:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Tom Elliot (Rohan Vider)

tx

David Brewer

It's definitely a possible consideration. But, his wolf status is hidden by secret blood. Even Loken can't penetrate that, or not easily at least. Anything shared would likely be the lies about his "lesser marks"... and maybe things like powerful Acolyte, or his exact level. Admittedly, having powerful Acolyte AND only lesser marks would generate a lot of suspicion.

David Brewer

Or they drop out at higher percentages. As in, say when they reach 30%... but also it's not clear if all pools are shared or not. Michael is taking mostly damage to his Psi pool.

David Brewer

True, but remember the tree IS flying still. Michael dodging among its branches risks falling. Not saying he can't, just that it adds complications.

Gregory Clifford

Exciting chapter! [Eventually, realizing, he would ...] No comma is needed after "realizing." [I stood stall on ...] I think you meant either "still" or "tall."

Joshua Adams

By any amount would only support the observation….

obiwann

Why? He is connected via a magical conduit…. Conduits typically work both ways in many magic systems. Just have to know how usually.

obiwann

His tiamten vest or whatever reduces AOE damage by what factor again?

Joshua Adams

And with that in mind, the fix might be as simple as saying that the concentrated barrage was actually more potent than he initially thought I don’t know, but we’re also only really seeing the results of the psi draining from individual thorns. Also, the reason for the widespread attacks before was that it made it harder to dodge, with a more concentrated attack, though more powerful, it would open up his options to dodge.

David Brewer

That's fair. I see it more as he's been rather focused on his fight in rather different circumstances. Previously, he had insane health/mana/psi/stamina regeneration and was able to dodge the thorns some of the time as well. Here, he can't really dodge and the tree has shown a willingness to capitalize on that fact. Being "aware" of the possibility isn't the same as having it waved in his face watching his Psi pool rapidly diminish like it did. It's possible it might merit a rewrite (to make Tom's intent more clear), but I think it's reasonably clear Michael was initially overconfident because of the unusual situation he had previously.

Joshua Adams

Not being in the situation ourselves, maybe it’s difficult to imagine this, but the character is already aware of that possibility, having seen the damage before, and having experienced the ability before. So, when he makes the pronouncement that there shouldn’t be an issue, there should be some noticeable change that would make him think otherwise so soon. If you don’t see it, that’s fine, but sometimes our minds make automatic connections without seeing the situation in full, kind of like when you’re driving home from work, but don’t actually remember the actual drive because it’s all reflex. You may just be filling in a gap, but the point is that there is one.

David Brewer

Mostly before the tree was shooting a few thorns at him... taking potshots. I took the concern here as what if he shoots dozens or even hundreds of thorns at Michael simultaneously. Yes, he COULD have done that before but he didn't. This situation has the tree backed into a corner so he might be willing to "risk" using all his remaining thorns. They take time to regrow after all.

Joshua Adams

It does help provide some context. It’s just that there wasn’t anything I noticed to come to the same conclusion Michael did. He’d been fighting it for a few chapters now and had been aware of the damage from that particular ability no less, but it wasn’t clear how it became urgent or worse than what he should have expected. I’m sure you’ll figure it out though if you see it now.

obiwann

Well no I get that… wasnt meaning to say the circle would kill them… but it IS draining them of mana, psi, stamina etc. and they in the most dangerous territory (arguably) in the entire forever kingdom. Just sayin… mega trust in him and their brothers

Tom Elliot (Rohan Vider)

oops... tx

Tom Elliot (Rohan Vider)

I see what you mean, and I realize why it comes across that way. In my head, though was full thought (not the broken-off one displayed). "But I was not so sure I would survive another, especially not if—" "But I was not so sure I would survive another, especially not if void tree concentrated his next attack and launched many times more thorns in the next salvo." The full thought makes it clearer, doesn't it? Will rework somehow.

Tom Elliot (Rohan Vider)

tx

Tom Elliot (Rohan Vider)

well, they can drop out of the transference circle, so they not letting themselves be killed, just drained.

Tom Elliot (Rohan Vider)

urgh, tx

Yep

Pls let him start to tame/purge the nether... maybe involving ghost's new ability.

mark janson

Tftc ❤️

Joshua Adams

That's cool; that wasn't what I was saying though.

Yep

He was more angry because he thought they betrayed him.

Grady Perry

I love Tom’s timing when he posts these. Every morning I get up at 5am to go to the gym before school and there’s another chapter waiting for me. Then after school and I get home around 5pm there’s the second chapter! It’s like he knows when I check.

Orion_777

that's unlikely

Michael Rabbitt

“Transcendence circle still active.” I believe it’s supposed to be transference

Colin Holloway

i came here to say this

Yep

He must kill it and get a crazy thing, hopefully involving taming the nether.

Joshua Adams

I really love these chapters for the start of this new book. One thing that read weird to me was that one second he was certain he’d survive the encounter with or without their help when he said “ And there would be an after”, but then he said he wasn’t sure if he’d survive. It was just really unclear why he thought their help wasn’t completely necessary one moment and dire the next.

Alejandro

🫶

Harley Dalton Jr.

Thanks for the chapter.

CipherFTW

Ooooh Michael... don't taunt the universe... I forsee the other tree getting involved

obiwann

Seriously wondering if this transference was one way… or if the brotherhood somehow can now discern all about him… including his wolf prime to be status. 😱

Grady Perry

Another banger by the goat

Alexander C Hyde

That last paragraph. He likely just jinxed himself.

Alexander C Hyde

Eventually, realizing{,} he would not be allowed to anchor his roots anew, the void tree changed tactics and shot skyward. {Selected part unneeded.}

obiwann

Ah damn!!! This book be lit and it’s only 4 chapters in!!! Brotherhood all of a sudden showing mega trust ! Can u imagine letting an unknown drain u in a sector where if u die… it’s final death?!??! Dayummmm

Samuel Strode

Can’t wait for the kill notification

Seraquel

Oh dear, really tempting fate with those last words..

Alexander C Hyde

(Not deigning)Deigning to reply, I dug my clawed hind quarters into the hard bark beneath and anchored myself in place.

Suraj Rodrigo

Tftc


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