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Jay and Carly, Book 2 Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2020-09-03 19:04:28 +0000 UTC

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Finally made time to read this - interesting choice. I can see this becoming a challenge from Tennille - can Jay keep the relationship if Tennille joins and then seperates messily? Somehow, I can see her as that kind of manipulative. . .

I thoroughly enjoyed getting to know Tennille in this chapter! She seems absolutely delightful, with a vulnerable side that grounds the story in something truthful. I also liked, as pointed out in the story, that it was the rare true "date" among all of Jay's adventures -- the first date with Starla was one of my favorite early chapters (as Starla was one of my favorite characters). There's something about that build-up that results in an even more rewarding pay-off. And as someone who has topped off many an eventful evening at Steak 'n Shake myself, I thought that was a nice touch!


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