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🕑 Added 2020-11-19 18:48:56 +0000 UTC

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You're not the only one that wants to see a reckoning for Road to Hell (and also to have it finally live up to its title)! It'll happen once I turn my attention back to it ;) And thanks for noticing I've grown as a writer. I do read some of my older stuff and cringe pretty hard. Not only were some of the subjects a little cringe-worthy but the writing style was also pretty rough. You can look at the originals from Road to Hell and see whole paragraphs that read like shopping lists of activities. "She walked in wearing X, Y, Z. She bent down. She begged to be fucked. She then pleaded. She asked to be spanked. She came. She thanked him." It's one of the reasons I wanted to polish that one up. I don't have it in me to do a full "rewrite" but polishing off the roughest edges and giving it a fair ending is very much on my "to do" list ;) Again, thanks for commenting. It's always great to talk to you guys who, given the subject matter I write about, have always really impressed me with the quality of your thoughts and opinions!

BlissfulDarkness

I took Road to Hell as non-con, especially since the MC admits that they are doing what they want in the beginning. It was "saved" by his attention to try and make sure she enjoys it, but then gets a bit rocky with Debbie for me as well.. I would enjoy a reckoning in that series too, where they understand what has happened and actually consent to it with a clear head, though that breaks the spirit of that story. I suppose it may also be I feel you've grown as a writer since then. I know early Jay/Carly had similar concerns that you improved in later chapters.

Always happy to reply... just out of curiosity, what's your opinion on the "Road to Hell" series. After all, it's "consentless" subliminals that the main character is using. Is it a matter of perspective? Because we're seeing through the MC's eyes we see that his intentions were good at first and that he seems to ease his wife into things and care that she is enjoying herself? Or does that storyline bother you as much as this one?

BlissfulDarkness

Considering I've enjoyed all your other writing, I'll give the benefit of doubt for future chapters, but even if this one never sits with me, I've enjoyed everything else, and I can't expect everything to be to my tastes. Thanks for replying to my concerns either way.

The concept of consent is tricky and complex. People can perceive consent as being given when, in fact, it wasn't. People can even verbally give consent when they felt immense pressure to give that consent and thus it's arguable whether or not it was valid. Don't expect the relationship between Alexis and Rebeccah to be 100% smooth. No relationship is and this one is no different. Expect Rebeccah (particularly given her particularly brand of "sheltered liberalism" to raise many of the points you just did.

BlissfulDarkness

I'm honestly not sure how I feel about this story. I think the part that bugs me is that Rebeccah was never given the ability to consent to watching and is basically ordered around by some guy. I don't have a problem with Alexis being free use if that's what she wants, but it felt like everyone was trying to hide from Rebeccah how Alexis was earning her keep until Rebeccah was stuck in an awkward situation while high on NRE from making out with the hot woman she met on her first day of college... and the cliffhanger of Alexis trying to kiss her with the guy's cum on her face (And that Alexis clearly cares more about being a good fucktoy than whatever Rebeccah might feel about it) just makes this weird for me, especially since you have taken care in most of your other writing to clearly show consent being discussed, to some degree or another.


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